While most work is done in the pre-writing stages, students pull together their resources to construct memorable memoirs. To do this, students can access the characteristics of a memoir as a guide to write noteworthy memoirs.
Characteristics of a Memoir
The characteristics of a memoir come into play as students begin to put pen to paper. These features are commonly found in memoir writing. To help students understand these features, provide examples of well-written memoirs, displaying the characteristics of a memoir. Students won’t successfully include all of these on their first try, but it’s important to discuss the characteristics of a memoir. Here are a few tips for discussion:
- Get to know the narrator. The audience must connect with the narrator. Share information about yourself or things you might have in common with the audience.
- Use description that brings the story to life. Teachers commonly use the phrase “show not tell” here. Use descriptive words and phrases, making the reader feel like they were present when the action took place.
- Include dialogue that shows feeling. In this case, less often means more. Include only the most important dialogue that has the most impact.
- Feature a beginning that catches the reader’s attention. Hook your readers immediately. A few ideas include starting in the middle of the action, having the characters talk, beginning with a surprising statement or fact or giving some important background information.
- Add sensory details. These are words or descriptions that appeal to one of your senses. Sensory details provide a complete look at the story, and make your memoir more interesting.
- Share thoughts and feelings. This allows readers to understand how the experience affected you, and what you were going through. Thoughts and feelings help build a connection to the narrator.
- Reveal why the event was important. Writers share what they learned from this experience, building a connection with the audience. Writers want to evoke an emotional response from the reader.
Memoir Writing
Memoir writing is really pulling it all together. Many students don’t realize they’ve already done the hard work: thought of an idea, developed the idea and elaborated on details. Model for students how to use their resources, demonstrating memoir writing. Tips for constructing a first draft include:
- Write on every other line on one side of the paper. Keep your writing as neat as possible, but don’t worry if you make a mistake. This makes revising easier.
- Add new ideas that come to mind as you write. Memoir writing is a process of discovery.
- Note any parts you may want to change, or make the changes as you write.
Memoir Writing for Middle School Students
Discusses memoir writing for middle school students, including creative brainstorming, outlining and planning ideas.
